Friday, December 19, 2008

sledding by carson knight

This is a picture of me sleding a year ago this is my favorite picture because of the determination in it form my brother it was a freezing day in the winter it was like sleding on ice and when you would fall it was like landing on a bead of metal and when you would fall you would go sliding in the slush so you would get so wet that it would look like you just got back from a swim
So my brother started to test me by going off some of the biggest jumps on the hill some of them looked like they were as tall as Mount Everest it was one of the most steepest inclines I have ever seen on that hill in my whole life so my bro decided to go off of the jump it was the must horrible crashes I saw at the hill in Murray park that day the thrill and temptation in him was like a bull in a china shop so he started his decent to victory or falior
He was going down the hill so fast that I got a little scared he hit the take off of the jump and the sled had a sharp end to it so he didn’t go off the jump instead the sled got stuck at the top of the jump and he went flying he screamed oh no I went to grab him but it was to late he started his painful journey down the hill his face slammed into the ground
And he did what skaters call a scorpion it is a painful crash it is when the person that is in the crash his legs go up and touch the back of his head and some times it can really injure you he went sliding down the hill and he flipped a few times and he came to rest at the bottom of the cold icey hill he you could see the blood on his face he was panting and saying get me to the doctor please
He went to the hospital and he got some pain meds and the next day he was in his bed and I asked him if he wanted to go sleding and he said yes he did want to go sleding so we went back to Murray park and we had a really fun time we went to the other side of the hill and went slidding down to the pond below and then when we hit the pond we yelled oh yeah that was fun then the day ended we called our dad to come and get us
When we got hone we got some hot food we had steak and beans the perfect meal after such a cold frigid day after our food we went and played a game my bro won it was connect four after our game we had dessert it was hot coco it was one of the most fun days of my life

3 comments:

Brooklyn said...

Interesting story! Great desciptions! ~Brooklyn

Writer said...

That was a great story-Jacob Curtis.

Writer said...

That was a interesting story.

Good Job!

~ Kilee Livingston~