Friday, February 13, 2009

"Metaphor Madness" by: Marla Jones

Life is stars in the sky. You look up and some are with others and some are looking over all alone. No one comes to comfort them. Some are sitting there shining alone. No one cares about the star alone all they want is to be the shiniest group of stars. My life is not to good right now.

When I was in middle school then my friends would always ditch me and do everything theirselves and leave me out. Then in a different grade they started being nice to me. Then now they are starting to be way mean again even more than the first time.

So life is a star and I'm the star that gets left out. All the stars standing together are my friends. They all want to be popular and leave me out. I like them but I just don't like the way they act. I think that they don't realize that they are doing this so I really don't blame them. THE END!!!!!!!

6 comments:

Writer said...

im really sorry marla i didnt no you really felt that badly i dont really think that you like me but your a snug

Writer said...

im really sorry marla i didnt no you really felt that badly i dont really think that you like me but your a snug

the iceman said...

you sound rather pissed

the iceman said...

you seem to think that your life sucks but o well maybe we can be best friends because i alson think the world should feel sad for us

writer said...

dont worry that one time happened to me.....or twice but here is some advice just do your best and dont tell them there screwen up they just dont realize how bad there hurting you maybe you should have them check hjhwrites.blogspot.com but i guess that might make them think youre feeling sorry for yourself but dont give up hope they luv u inside and neither of them realize it and i read youre other comments dont take it personal......(dont give up)

writer said...

hey are you that one shy child at my old school i used to go to hillcrest junior high in murray hey did you used to have a pinkish orangish type of coat jacket thingy....well i always thought of talking to you, you always looked lonely and i didnt dare to speak even a squeak